Embracing On the Mountainside
Creation is Watching
Perspective of Creation watching the Lovers
Two figures on a mountainside
Embracing as the Heavens cry
Creation has waited so long
Finally love is found!
Watching in wonder…
Creation treasures these moments the most
Creations song for the Lovers
As Clouded veils honor them with thoughtful tears
Heavenly stars demand cantata
The Wind and Rain play their enchanted hymns
With the refrain of Thunder and Lightning
Creation has only one care
Two together and holding each other near
The Lovers song to Creation
Their love becomes like holy wine
Pouring itself upon thirsty skin
Each word prayed like living streams
Nothing will ever change
After all these years these feeling remain the same
Perspective of the Lovers watching Creation
Two Lovers embracing on the mountainside
Watching in wonder the world before them
They have waited so long
Finally love is found
These moments they treasure the most
Remember…
When you watch Creation– Creation is watching you
Not sure if I should let this one stand or give it the full treatment.
I like the idea of creation watching... but not sure if this poem evokes any emotion in the reader.
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