Baylee Kraus

My shattered soul

I would go the end of the world for you
Jump In front of a bullet
Lie for you
I would do whatever it takes two make  you happy.
Yet
You would barely take to steps for me
You would jump out of the way so I would get shot
You would do what ever it takes to make you happy
I guess that’s the one thing we had in common
Even if that means braking my soul and making me feel nothing
Love was the only thing to take me away is so cliche but I have no other words for it
For you
And even after the bruises the broken bones and broken soul  i would still do so many things
For you
Now how’s that
Because you only let me be with you
And I feel like all I can have is you
And I hate you for that with every piece of my shattered soul

I love your poem but you have minor errorsCorrections:I would do whatever it takes to make you happy.YetYou would barely take two steps for meYou would jump out of the way so I would get shotYou would do what ever it takes to make you happyI guess that's the one thing we had in commonEven if that means breaking my soul and making me feel nothingOverall nice poem!

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