To my lover
I am a french student and I want to try writing poetry. This is my first poem Please let me know If it is good enough and if I could modify something ;)
Dew is covering my garden, As an invitation to open my eyes Virtuous nature that thinks of me Irresistibly I am drove to you, Devoted and delighted
I’m flying Lighter than air Swirling with autumn leaves Golden brown, Yellow,
The water Falls in a mellow harmony Helping me to clear my mind And direct the current of my thoug… I close my Eyes
I stare at the mirror All I see is a Monster When have I started to become This horrifying wraith? Like Dorian Gray
There is a used, Withered coat Hanging in that wardrobe Holes Run through it
When I look at his eyes I get a glimpse of his soul Bright, Only a gleam of sun makes them spa… Of a beautiful green,
Light is her name She is precious like gold Luckier than Fortuna, Always outruning fate Flames blaze from her eyes
Pain radiates from my shoulders As I am carrying the whole world I imagine others hurting Like it could ease my pain But it won’t ever go away
Tears rolling down my cheeks I am sad Tired, Of torturing my mind Wondering
Anxiety is dancing in my mind In a loud trance My fears Are rushing into my head How can I ever stop them?
He is of the men you see eveyday A nice fellow working his way But you don’t know him like I do As what defines him is virtue You would’t believe how many times
Today I feel like i am falling of… only to meet the hard, cold floor of my bathroom I cry for help I scream silently
What a beautiful rose in my garden I look at her And I remember Only her Can keep my secrets forever
Nothing particular to this shirt, Juste an old piece of fabric One might say But to me it’s a rare and precious item
This evening I look at the Sky I see a burst of magnificent colou… And I realize there’s something I Had not seen…