To my lover
I am a french student and I want to try writing poetry. This is my first poem Please let me know If it is good enough and if I could modify something ;)
Dew is covering my garden, As an invitation to open my eyes Virtuous nature that thinks of me Irresistibly I am drove to you, Devoted and delighted
He is of the men you see eveyday A nice fellow working his way But you don’t know him like I do As what defines him is virtue You would’t believe how many times
Pain radiates from my shoulders As I am carrying the whole world I imagine others hurting Like it could ease my pain But it won’t ever go away
I’m flying Lighter than air Swirling with autumn leaves Golden brown, Yellow,
It’s the darkest night I have ever witnessed The Moon reflects on the river In a luminescent wave Here I am
Incredible is my mother She is kind like no other A pure Angel is nothing compared… Beautiful and fraich as dew, Enchantress
Anxiety is dancing in my mind In a loud trance My fears Are rushing into my head How can I ever stop them?
There is a used, Withered coat Hanging in that wardrobe Holes Run through it
Light is her name She is precious like gold Luckier than Fortuna, Always outruning fate Flames blaze from her eyes
I stare at the mirror All I see is a Monster When have I started to become This horrifying wraith? Like Dorian Gray
Words are slipping away From my lips Flooded with emotion I am As the mirage finally came to life
A witch he thinks I am That a spell I’ve cast on him Through the delicous taste Of what I baked,
The water Falls in a mellow harmony Helping me to clear my mind And direct the current of my thoug… I close my Eyes
Tears rolling down my cheeks I am sad Tired, Of torturing my mind Wondering
Sunshine, Driven by Helios through the Sky In a golden chariot To the sole purpose Of illuminating my life