Dulled Senses And Muted Voice
by: Imrogue
She succumbed to the roughest touch
over and over again...
She was aware, but remained still...
overwhelmed with repulsion...
triggering wrath
inside the essence of her being...
it lasted like eternity...
tears broke through
her innocent eyes...
her voice inside
remained muted...
senses dulled...
numbed....
in her
lifetime
Vic Evora
10yI like the "visuals" of the written poem as well.
Imrogue
10ythanks!
Imrogue
10ythanks!
Olga Gavrilovskiy
10yPowerful
Hawk
9yI really like this one. I just read a few of your poems and they're all really clever in regards to how you present them. I never get round to reading other people's poems but I felt I should since you often read mine and I'm glad I did :)
Robert L. Martin
9yI liked this one a lot.
Imrogue
9yThank you for reading and commenting.