"It's like trying to describe what you feel when you're standing on the rim of the Grand Canyon or remembering your first love or the birth of your child. You have to be there to really know what it's like."
Jack Schmitt
In early 2012, my ex-wife and I took a 10-day holiday to see places in Arizona, primarily Sedona and the Grand Canyon. It was an attempt to repair our broken relationship. Unfortunately, the trip didn’t help. We divorced months later. Unlike the Grand Canyon constancy thru the aeons, our relationship did not last a lifetime.
Originally I wrote the poem in the first person. There was drama in the verbiage which I did not find appealing twelve years later. So I rewrote it in the third person and used a pair of sonnets as the vehicle. Also, I toned down the sentiment and focused more on the magnificence of the Grand Canyon