(1918)
This poem, addressed to Orwell’s friend Jacintha Buddicom, refers to a disagreement between the Oxford High School authorities and the Buddicoms over their agnosticism.
Jacintha suggested substituting ‘naked souls’ with ‘unarmoured’.
Orwell himself inserted the line ‘Stops to caress and onward goes’ before ‘Bringing its earthy odours sweet’, having initially written it after that line.
(Taken from The Orwell Prize - http://theorwellprize.co.uk/george-orwell/by-orwell/poetry/the-pagan)