The importance of a sentence is usually told in the sentence itself, whereas "extra" details are withheld in brackets, this poem is the exact opposite. The sentences are beautiful lies. The brackets are harsh truths and inherently of more import.
Written at 3:04 am on 05/12/2015.
© L.J. Slaferek
The frost on the trees Glittering in the morning light A shroud of purest white Lies upon the field A blanket with the waves of a sea
What is the blackness other than n… Could it be something tangible? Something you can embrace? What if it is the one embracing? Every night, as you lie
He is silent He is sad He is in the dark He is judged He is ugly
Sweet, sweet Nothing What could be more beautiful than… For Something is always Broken, Destroyed, Ruined, Who wouldn’t seek to pursue Nothi…
I regret Leaving them behind Saying goodbye One last time– I regret
Your inability to see What’s killing me Endlessly This is my destiny A loop of death
Raging rivers of hurt Ending in Cascading waterfalls of sorrow That crash into A deep, dark lake of responsibilit…
The fall is less frightening Than the ledge upon which I stand To fly like a bird is freedom To stand like a monolith to pain i… The water looks so calm below
The Sound of Nothing What sound does Nothing make? The sound of quiet A soothing sound Or a lonely one?
I am drowning In fire And burning In water. The fire embraces me in a cold whi…
Thoughts collapse Mind full of gaps Can’t escape Pain takes shape Cuts on a wrist
Writing poetry at 4 am Is not as romantic as the poets sa… It is not with love I write Or hatred It is neither
'Tic Toc’' The clock struck one There is a young man Who did not feel so young Who envied a clock the time it had
Dim, grim, dark nights For thoughts to grow And darken even further still Sad, twisted, angry thoughts Swirl in the blackness that
Ice cold Nice cold, Frosty breath Chilling death. Burning flame