one but needs to set their mind to frame all moments a thousand times in passions light stripping them of all that does not avail thus bare within the heart revealing heaven unto the poorest beggar in us all the sweetness of 1st loves kiss the touch that quarrels not finding favor in GODs full view no longer hidden but embraced befriended with open arms made drunk onto death and life thereafter a thousand times crying out in passions light bid I to frame all moments thus and thus and thus ado
Amber M. Royse
11ySomething I definitely strive to do!
Cory Garcia
11yI know :) Keep it up!
Richard Walker
11yAmber said "something to strive for" and rightly so, but distraction often rules our minds and can take over, all we can do is to try our best.
Cory Garcia
11yAmen :)
Cindy
11yI guess we all should try to look at our time in this way. Something simple, but what a difference it could make. Very nice poem.
Cory Garcia
11yThank you Cindy
Debra Romero
11yA hard task to keep in mind but a wonderful thought indeed...I like this!
Cory Garcia
11yone
but needs
to set
their mind
to frame
all moments
a thousand times
in passions light
stripping them
of all
that does
not avail
thus bare
within
the heart
revealing
heaven
unto
the poorest
beggar
in us
all
the sweetness
of 1st
loves kiss
the touch
that quarrels
not
finding favor
in GODs
full view
no longer
hidden
but
embraced
befriended
with open
arms
made drunk
onto death
and
life thereafter
a thousand
times
crying out
in passions
light
bid I
to frame
all
moments
thus
and
thus
and
thus
ado
Robert L. Martin
10yShort but full of wisdom
Cory Garcia
10yThanks brother. Loved your poetic manifesto by the way :)